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字数：300 满分：100分
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How to Use Money in a Good Way With the development of economic,goods are becoming more expensive than before,so it's insidpensible to buy things in a correct way.Thrift is the traditional virtue of China,and it provide a good life style to us. In order to encourage consumption,many businesses give activities such as sales and coupons to encourage consumers to buy their goods,and many preferential ways come to our life,like Meituan,Nuomituan,and some other group-buy software.These App store are ues for buying things,and shopping with these,you'll save a lot of money.
