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2014高考英语作文预测集中训练6:中学生该不该上网

发布时间:2014-06-06 17:46浏览次数:542
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你要参加一场英语辩论赛,主题是“中学生该不该上网”。在参赛之前,你要查阅相关资料,并准备你的辩论发言。至少包含以下的内容要点:
1)因特网给人们带来的好处;
2)举例说明迷恋上网的害处;
3)你的建议。
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 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不能抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
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Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet
 Fifteen years ago, the Internet was unheard of by most people. Today, the Internet is one of the most powerful tools throughout the world. The Internet is a collection of various services and resources.
 Many fear the Internet because of its disadvantage. They claim (主张) not to use the Internet because they are simply not interested or are afraid of the possible consequences (后果). Children using the Internet has become a big concern. When children talk to others online, they do not realize they could actually be talking to a person who may harm them later. There are many examples that children have been convinced (说服) to meet people they have talked with online.
The most common thing the Internet is used for is research. Children and students are among the top ones who use the Internet for research. Today, it is almost required that students use the Internet for research. Another popular thing to do on the Internet is to check out the news. Almost all-local news can be got through the Internet.

用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂,需要多使用一些学术词汇;采用了一些简单的从句;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Hello everyone,today i am going to talk about the advantage and disadvantage of Internet. As everyone knows ,Internet those days are being used as a tool to cominicate with the world or other people.It's easily for to know what's going on over the world.And we can find the information we need by using the Internet. But other people are worried about the using of the Internet.There are too many bad people cheating on the Internet.Young people don't know how to recognize the information that showed on the Internet. I suggested that we should do all we can to provide a more healthy environment for the young kids.So that we can let the Internet to be used in a more positive way.

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