学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;能够使用一些简单的从句。
We interviewed the psychology professor named Kelly Lam about the topic of Chinese students's opinions on share feelings with others on last weekend. Having known that above the 30% of students are unwilling to share their emotion whatever it's happiness or sadness.our education is failure on this aspect on account of our students still misunderstand the significance of education. There is no denying the fact that it is of vital importance for us to learn to share our feelings with others in the stage we lived.I'm deeply convinced that the more we share with others,the healthier we will grow.