作者词汇表达较恰当,也能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
We interviewed the psychology professor named Kelly Lam about the topic of the Chinese students's opinions on share feelings with others last weekend. Having known that above the 30% of students are unwilling to share their emotion and whatever it's happiness or sadness.Our education is unsuccessfully on this aspect, on account of our students still misunderstand the significance of the education. There is no denying the fact that it is of vital importance for us to learn to share our feelings with others.I'm deeply convinced that the more we share,the more we grow healthier.