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2010年6月英语六级作文真题:忽视中文学习

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:35浏览次数:2786
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题目 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese
要求
1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象;
2.出现这种现象的原因和后果;
3.我认为…
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Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese Chinese,which has been spoken by Chinese people for thousands of years,is now facing a crisis.Many a student pays too little attention to their mother tongue study. But why is it that The Chinese is in such terrible situation?For my point of view,we all regrad Chinese as a daily life necessity,instead of something related more to the aesthetic function.Therefore, just now how to use simple Chinese is OK,which doesn't require every people to pay plenty of attention,let alone their having no conscious to beautify their divine mother tongue .Finally,the neglection of Chinese learning is in the air in China . This phenomenon is awful.Chinese is an extremely glamorous language,and in the history,numerous brilliant poems are written in Chinese ,of which our Chinese people are proud.All in all,the culture heritage should not be abused,and it is our obligation to protect Chinese ,making it more influential in the morden world . Ergo,attention do should be given to the study of Chinese

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