文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
As we all konw ,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket ! on the one hand ,it will increase the risk of failure in any case .on the other hand ,instead ,if we put all eggs in different baskets respectively ,we can not only decrease the risk of failure ,but also benefit a lot from the strategy . According to the robust company in the world ,we can find that survival discipline obviously .take Bill gate's company as a example .except its major business ,it also involved in many relative areas .undoubtedly ,this strategy has benefits him a lot .this discipline also works well in diplomatic issues of a country .you will never see a country support just another one in public . no matter what you do and who you are ,as long as you want to be excellent and get along with others harmoniously,follow this discipline is you best choice .