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黑龙江大庆实验中学2013届高三下学期4月月考试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:19浏览次数:1916
要求:
现在,照顾老年人成了一个突出的社会问题。你公司顺应社会需求,适时推出了家用机器人。该机器人的主要功能有:
1. 在固定的时间做饭,时间可按需调整;
2. 陪老人聊天,下棋,做运动等;
3. 及时处理突发事件。如老人生病时,拨打急救电话等。
请根据以上内容写一个发言稿,在新闻发布会上向大家推荐这一公司新产品。
注意:
1.词数为100左右;
2.内容可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.短文开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:突出的,显著的 prominent
作文开头:
Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for attending our company’s news conference. As you know, ____________
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评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for attending our company’s news conference. As is known to all, with the economy's developing, people have to face various pressures,therefore, They don't have enough time to attend to the old people in their family, which has become a seriously social problem.on no account can our company ignore it. To solve this problem, our company has put out the household robot,designing to take care of old people.In the first place, It can cook meals at a fixed time, which can be adjusted according to individual needs.Furthermore, It can also accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise and so on.More spectacular, it can deal with emergencies. For example,the report will call fall help when the old people fall ill suddenly. i would appreciate it if you decide to support us.It would be of large help for you if you own such a robot.Thank you for listening.

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