Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。
Nowadays communication depends on the internet mostly.Since we started used the electronic communication,it made our life totally different.It brought humanbeing convieniance and progress.We are whether on the phone or on the computer.Helps us touching with friends and gives us massive information.But it also makes people get stony.We ignore family around us,focuse on our own bussiness.Altogether,things have its good point and bad point.We should utilize it reasonable.Make a better life with it!