2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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I'm a big fan of online shopping.It shows people diverous goods.Online shopping is a lifestyle for current young people.You can almost find anything on it.We don't have to go out and walk for all day long.Input the name of the goods you want buy on computer,and you'll find it.But for most people.They lack of self-control.Because buying things are so easy and quick.They couldn't stop shopping.Probably spend thousand a day.Even though.If we can rational shopping on the internet,it's a big progress for human-being.