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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17595
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;从句用的不错,但有几处从句错误;文中词汇表达较为灵活,学术词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I don't agree with the statement that snap judpment are always unbelieveable. firstly,as far as I'm concerned,in some situation we need to make a decision and judgement the choice if true or not has effect on stuff of developing.formally,we tend to considering carefully so that we can avoid making some mistakes,however,it doesn't mean the conclusion with deep consideration lead a great solution.In our humanity long time of history,how many historical events happened has proved whether some views of point are trusted don't really depende on what times you repeat think the faces.For instance,in the world war of second,the she love you will believe you.

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