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单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章层次较为清晰。
Now,that's my pleasure to be a volunteer in Beijing Olympics of the 2008. As we all know,shooting is for living at first,it becomes one of the sports in 19 century.In 1896,Shooting becomes the progress of Olympics,It wasn't started from 1940 to 1928 until 1932,this is its first time to allow the women to join the shooting in Olympics of the 1968.Now,along with the development of the society,It increases from the three of shooting progresses to the seventeen of progresses from 1896 to now. That's all for the sharing of this experience that I got from my job!
