小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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i would like to be a good father when i grow up! Since my praent always going to work and didn't spend much time being with me. I really know how it's feel. So i decided when i grow up and with a child. I promise i will spend a lot of time with he/she. I will let her/him feel so many love. I will build up a very sweet home.