小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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I would like to be a good Father when i grow up! Since my parents always going to work and didn't spend much time being with me. I really realize how it's feel. So I decided when I grow up and with a child. I promise I will spend a lot of time with he/she. I will let her/him feel so many love. I will build up a very sweet home.