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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11298
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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nowadays ,with the more prodction of touch screen mobile phone ,more and mroe people are willing to talk by the phone ,the touch screen mobile phone is that a covinient tool ,it becomes a need production between modern people ,the primary reason is that it fits to all kinds of people ,and it looks like beautiful,so many people perfect using it than plate rolls. as coins ,it has two sides ,the phone has advantages as the same time it reasults less exchange among people ,people are talking to others by using the phone ,it makes reduce the way of face to face ,and using the phone to talk ,you are not able to see the motions ,which becomes hidden danger between the best friends .

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