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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦17:Good Ways to Keep Healthy

发布时间:2014-07-03 17:57浏览次数:599
要求:
健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80个词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出,不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。
1fooda balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat…
2exercisedo more exercise, take a walk, play ball games…
3happinesskeep happy, make friends, smile…
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简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;文章词汇不够丰富,但单词拼写要认真检查;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。

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Good ways to keep healthy As we all know, it is important for us to keep healthy.However,how do we keep healthy? In my opinion,firstly,we shoud keep an ablanced diet.Eat less meat,but eat more vegetables and fruit.Secondly,we should do more exercise.After meals,we can take a walk.We can play ball games on weekends.Meanwhile,keeping happy is helpful for our health.We should make more friends .Do you like smiling?Remeber smile is good for us. In a word,we should try our best to keep health.

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