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Good ways to keep healthy As we all know, it is important for us to keep healthy.However,how do we keep healthy? In my opinion,firstly,we shoud keep an ablanced diet.Eat less meat,but eat more vegetables and fruit.Secondly,we should do more exercise.After meals,we can take a walk.We can play ball games on weekends.Meanwhile,keeping happy is helpful for our health.We should make more friends .Do you like smiling?Remeber smile is good for us. In a word,we should try our best to keep health.