雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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Some people think the parents should spent more time with their children. From my point I am not totally agree with that. It depens on your childern age. And the childern also need pay more time with their parents when they grow up. For baby I mean the kids from 0 to 5 years old, the parents should pay more time with them and teach them some living knowledge. Based o the research, the character of kid is formed under 5 years old. The parents are the best teachers for their kids. It is important to tell your kid what is beautiful and what is urgly. For the primry school age childers, the parents should pay more time with them after they go back from school. The most important thing is checking the homework of your kids and try your best help the teacher who is sending the knowledge to your children in school time. Of course the parents should left some time for the kids. Then they can play with their friends and make social relationship during the free time. Before your children go to univercity, the parents should dereasing the coupling time with your children for the independent living. You should find some time to show how to deal with any kind of problems to your children and leave the space for your children as they can solve the problems with their methods. Unfortunately the childer will leave the parents sooner or later. The children mostly will leave their parents after graduating from university or finding a job. As they are still young they need help and advice from time to time. Parents cann't live with their children. But that doesn't mean the parents don't need pay some time with the kids. When the kids meet some probles such as losing job or devioce. At that time parents need to give them some valuable advices and help them come out from the sadow. When the children have their own families, the parents also become old. At this time the parents become lonely and need the childrens coupling. The best gift for the parents is the children's call. They want to know the situation of their children whatever how old their children are. In the holidays and weekend the parents are always looking forward to the children's visit. So in a word when the children are young the parents should pay more time with them. And when the children grow up they need pay more time with the parents.