2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错。
With the development of information technology, computers have already been involved into almost every aspect of our life. It is undoubted that computers bring in great convenience to us. However, sometimes computers can also lead us into great trouble. So we should make proper use of computers. Here are some reasons why we ought to avoid over-depending on computers. The first is that some students have deserted their studies as a result of losing themselves into computer games. In addition, if computers were attacked by hackers, we would suffer heavy loss, for the important information may be changed, even lost, and even worse situation may happen, that is, the secret of our government would give away which may do great harm to our country. Furthermore, the expense on buying computers and paying for the Internet will add to our financial burden. Therefore we should use computers to the best advantages but not to over depend on them.