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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(39):过度依赖电脑的弊端

发布时间:2013-11-18 17:34浏览次数:10559
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Perhaps the biggest difference is in the growth of computers. Computers can think, remember and calculate faster than any human brain. A computer can hold more than a billion facts in its memory. There are computers that are so big that they would fill this entire auditorium with machinery. Business and banks are now managed by computers. Students’ grades, their marks are all managed by the computer, not from your teachers. In America we pay bills. We have to pay our children’s university study from a computer and I pay the computer who then writes me another letter to say, “Thank you for your payment. You now own such-and-such amount.” This is not even seen by a human being. It is all between me and the computer. However, if a computer makes a mistake, that won’t help you. If a computer makes a mistake about one of you, it is terribly difficult to correct that mistake. And sometimes a computer does make a mistake; that mistake is never learned by another computer and the same mistake will go into other computers. And it becomes terribly difficult for one person to correct a mistake that has been made. So in many ways people have become the servant of computers who are bigger and cleverer than they are. Of course, computers speed up every operation because computers can immediately record, remember facts and produce new information that is combined with these facts. It makes science possible. Modern science would not be possible without the computers to do the calculations.
 
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你可以用实例或其他方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子.
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,

并包括如下要点:

沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;
骇客入侵对国家带来的危害;
上网需要大笔的费用。
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错。

用户练习作文:

With the development of information technology, computers have already been involved into almost every aspect of our life. It is undoubted that computers bring in great convenience to us. However, sometimes computers can also lead us into great trouble. So we should make proper use of computers. Here are some reasons why we ought to avoid over-depending on computers. The first is that some students have deserted their studies as a result of losing themselves into computer games. In addition, if computers were attacked by hackers, we would suffer heavy loss, for the important information may be changed, even lost, and even worse situation may happen, that is, the secret of our government would give away which may do great harm to our country. Furthermore, the expense on buying computers and paying for the Internet will add to our financial burden. Therefore we should use computers to the best advantages but not to over depend on them.

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