雅思写作范文:空运蔬菜水果的利弊

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Some person confirm that the fresh vegetables and fruits which tranisit by planes are more valuable. I can not totally agree with them as the air plane tanisition will increase the vegetables and fruts price significiantly and bring some environmental problems. First, the fresh vegetables and fruits which tranisited by air plane will bring some special worms from one zone to the othe zone. As the environments are different in different part of the earth, some sepcial vegetables and fruits will only grow up well at the original area. At the same time some worms are also mostsuitable in special zone. The total number of the worms are limit by the other kind of worm or animals such as birds. But if the fresh vegetable and fruits are tranisit by the air plane, the worms will be tranisisted at the same time. The worms might spread quickly in the new reas as there isn't their enemies. Second, based the morden technolgy we can plant the different kinds of vegetables and fruits and decrease the selling price. The morden agryclture technolgy has been used widely. The special atmosphere can be creat which is suitable for one kind of vegetable or fruit. For example now we can eat some vegetables in the winter as the farmers built some small warm rooms.It is more cheaper than air plane tranisist. From my opoin we should try to develope morden aryculture technolgy rather than tranisist the vegetables and fruits by air plane. All the person will benifit from this.