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No pain,no gain.As a university student,I have to learn to how to live for myself and adopt to the outside word.This is a sort of growth in my whole life.During this time,some students choose to waste their precious time to go shopping, play computer games,sleep all day in dorms,but some students devote themselves to studying and doing some worthy things which will be helpful their growth. What university students do on the compus is like a seed.When we enter into universities,we had sow a seed in the future.The seed may be the origial dream of yours.We have four or three years to nurtury our seeds and shape them into what we want to.So we should provent our seeds from danger and water them when dry.Sometimes we even need to give nurtritions for them. In a word,the way we care for the seed decide the seed whether be health or not. When I was a freshman,i told myself that I wanted to be a nice English teather ,so I have been spent much time to improve myself,not only my major knowledge but also cultivate myself to look like a real teacher.I alway reading in my spare time, indulge in the class and I had browned classes from my teacher to cumulate the skills of teaching. I think I have been able to stand in front of students confidentilyTthis capability is a kind of reward for me.If i went shopping and watched TV day and night since I went into the new school,lots of cloth should have been my rewars when i graduate. So gaining the success in univerty study is similar to havesting the rewards.
