文章层次较为清晰;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文章词汇表达丰富,若多用学术词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了。
No pain,no gain.As a university student,I have to learn to how to live for myself and adopt to the outside word.This is a sort of growth in my whole life.During this time,some students choose to waste their precious time to go shopping, play computer games,sleep all day in dorms,but some students devote themselves to studying and doing some worthy things which will be helpful their growth. What university students do on the compus is like a seed.When we enter into universities,we had sown a seed in the future.The seed may be the original dream of yours.We have four or three years to nurture our seeds and shape them into what we want to.So we should prevent our seeds from danger and water them when dry.Sometimes we even need to give nutrition for them. In a word,the way we care for the seed decide the seed whether is health or not. When I was a freshman,I told myself that I wanted to be a nice English teather ,so I have been spent much time to improve myself,not only my major knowledge but also cultivate myself to look like a real teacher.I always reading in my spare time, indulge in the class and I had browned classes from my teacher to cumulate the skills of teaching. I think I have been able to stand in front of students confidentily.Tthis capability is a kind of reward for me.If I went shopping and watched TV day and night since I went into the new school,lots of cloth should have been my rewars when i graduate. So gaining the success in univerty study is similar to harvesting the rewards.