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1997年专八英语作文真题:播种 施肥 收获

发布时间:2013-05-18 12:04浏览次数:1386
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Some people hold the view that a student’s success in university study follows the pattern as that of farming, which is characterized by sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards’ process. Write an essay of about 300 words on the topic given below to support this view with your own experience as a university student. Sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards  
字数:300满分:100分
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;文章层次较为清晰。

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No pain,no gain.As a university student,I have to learn to how to live for myself and adopt to the outside word.This is a sort of growth that benefits my whole life. During this time,some students choose to waste their precious time to go shopping, play computer games,sleep all day in dorms,but some students devote themselves to studying and doing something worthy to build a better future. What university students do on the compus is like a seed.When we enter into universities,we had sown seeds of the future.The seed may be our original dreams.We have four or three years to nurture our seeds and shape them into what we want to.So we should prevent the seeds from danger and water them when dry.Sometimes we even need to give nutrition for them. In a word,the way we care for the seed determines the seed whether to be health or not. When I was a freshman,I told myself that I wanted to be an English teacher.So I have been spent much time to improve myself, studying English and cultivating myself to look like a real teacher.I always read books in my spare time, indulge in the class and I had managed to demand that I would be given the chances to advance the skills of teaching. I think I have been able to stand in front of students confidently.This capability is a kind of reward for me.If I went shopping and watched TV day and night since I went into the new school,lots of cloth should have been my rewars when I graduate. So gaining the success in university study is similar to having the harvest.

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