小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

I want to tell you about my friend gaoqian.she is slim as i am.she has long dark hair.she is one of my best friends. Gaoqian is generous.she is willing to share things with her friends.she is also very helpful and is ready to help people any time.she is helps me with my homework and when she is on the bus,she always gives her seat to someone in need. Gaoqian wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up. Gaoqian and i may not get to see each other often,but we will always be best friends.