小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

My friend Amy is a nice girl. she is talkative and diligent. She has two siblings. She always wear that old outfit . it looks a little loose to her. because the outfit from her elder sister. But I never heard she complained of it. After dismissal she helps her mum do many chores.