2014高考英语作文预测集中训练10:去伦敦旅游

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Dear Sir/Madame, hello,my name is Li hua,I am studying lanuage in the Oxford of the US ,I am going to the Lodon in the weekend. At the computer,I have something which I am not understand,so, I need your help,I want to gain your help very much. I would appreciate if you write me as soon as possible. I will wait for your letter.Lastly,thank you very much! Yours, Li Hua