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2011年10月8日雅思写作真题:Population Ageing

发布时间:2013-07-25 16:08浏览次数:1560
要求:

【题目要求

The trend of the proportion of older people is increasing steadily. Is it positive or negative to society?

【题目翻译】

在很多国家,老年人所占的比重正在逐渐上升。你认为这对于社会的好处大于坏处吗?

【关键词分析】

older people

“老年人”有很多说法,这个词在文章中肯定会多次出现,因此一定要做好同义替换准备。elderly people, the elderly,pensioners, senior citizens都可以,但要少用old people.

ageing society (Br.E.) / aging society (Am.E.)

老龄化社会,这个词是必备的社会学术语。这个词虽然没有在题目中出现,但是考生一定会在正文中用到这个词。

关于ageing society的相关知识,请阅读维基百科http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ageing

话题分类与题型

本题是老题,与2006211日的真题完全一致,与201036日的话题也基本相同。属于社会类话题的“人口结构与老龄化”分支。题型为议论文中的“利弊分析”。

话题评价

社会类话题今年考的频率异常偏少,上一次考社会类话题是在2011219日(妇女是否应当参军),因此这次话题完全在预料当中。本话题难度较小,考生应该不会感到无话可说。

类似话题

1.   Surveys show that in many countries,people are living longer but increased life expectancy has manyimplications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole.What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals andsociety? (100306)

2.   Some people believe that in order togive opportunities to the new generation, companies shouldencourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Doyou agree or disagree? (030712, 030809)

3.   In many countries today there isinsufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons? Whatproblems might it bring to the society? (060708)

4.   The older generations have verytraditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking andbehaviour. However, some people think that these ideas are nothelpful for the young generation to prepare for modern life. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(080119)

5.   Some countries have anever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 andyounger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects itmay have in those countries? (080419)

【结构与思路】

利弊分析型的文章结构比较简单,一般只需罗列其好处坏处,结论段提出简单的解决方法即可。通常认为,老龄化社会的坏处可能要比它带来的好处更多,因此可以弱写好处段,重点放在负面影响上。

用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确。

用户练习作文:

Due to the development of medical care and the changes of people’s minds, the number of aging people has increased rapidly in recent years. This change shows the progress of society, however, some people who hold opposing views think that it is a regress of the whole nation. From my perspective, this is the inevitable process of civilisation, but the problems should be solved. In terms of the growth of older people, the advantages are obvious. First of all, to some extent, it helps youngsters reduce their heavy burdens, especially for the workers who have children. For instance, in eastern cultures, it is tradition for elder to take good care of their grandsons or granddaughters. By doing this, parents workers are more likely to keep balance between work and family as well as concentrate on their work. For company, it is also beneficial to boost productivity and efficiency and therefore gain more profits. Moreover, elder play an important role in society. After retirement, most of them choose to do some social works, like volunteers for social stability. On the minus side, this change has adverse effects on the economy. Apparently, there is no enough labor inn domestic market as more and more people are getting older. And that is why some countries employ a lot of foreign workers from other countries. It also directly leads to many vacancy in certain occupation, so people have to delay their retirement no matter whether they are competent. The most important is the revenue of medical system or other relevant fields has jumped in past several decades, which makes governments have financial deficit, such as Greece, Germany and Japan. To sum up, we cannot deny that aging society has strengths, but its negative effects and corresponding consequences should be realised and we should take actions as soon as possible.

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