雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；用词灵活多样，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨。

Nowadays in China, my families only have one child, and most parents are very fond of their kids. Somebody suppose that parents should take more time to accompany their kids in order to grow them properly. Others claim that excessive accompanying would lead to the downgrade of creation ability of their kids. I am firmly for the latter because Children need the space to develop the merit of independence and they just need some guidance and advice from their parents sometimes. To start with, our parents like to lead their kids how to play, sometimes they buy some toys and squeeze their leisure time to play with kids together. This is not to say it's not appropriate, but if you always do in this way it might let your kids excessively relying on you. For example, parents always teach kids how to build a model by using LEGO bricks, but you never would imagine if without your help your kid might create a new model you couldn't imagine before. Creativity is very important for a kid's further growth. Then, many kids don't know how to make friends, that's because they seldom play outsider without parents accompanying. Almost all parents hope their children some day become a successful person. But sometimes, you have to let them be, be themselves, then they will have distinctive trait which might be a main factor of future's success. Furthermore, parents should leave their children enough space to practice the independence. For example, assign your kids with some tasks without parents help, like live alone at the weekend, cook themselves, take care themselves, give them freedom. In addition, you need to make sure the safty first. Finally, if parents should take more time or not is not a black and white issue, parents should take the way in moderation. Excessive acommpanying is not good but it's better than excessive indulgency.