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湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:12浏览次数:1352[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an English composition on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题

3.你的建议

注意:字数:100左右。可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
评语:

在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

With sharp rapid of technologe development,our life has changed a lot .for example ,online shopping at presant becomes a fashion way. Online shopping is of great benefit to us.ln the first place ,it is a conveinent way for people to go shopping.we could sit ourselves at home rather than go out. On the one hand, it is said that it saves much time.Secondly,Online shopping is aslo cheaper than in shopping malls.On the other hand,it saves money. However,it does us much harm.such as it not very safe that we should pay more attention. In my opinion ,we should treat it carefully.Making full use of conveinence and pay attennion to safety. If we do it ,we will have a good lifestyle.

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