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Dear Mary, Thanks for your invitation letter.I want to go to your birthday party very much.But I have to do many things.For example:do my homework;wash my clothes.On that day.I have to visit my grandparents with my parents.So I can't go to your birthday party.It's so regret.But I still Thanks for your invitation letter. And I hope you will have a great time.Thank you very much. Yours Lucy.