2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，但文章中拼写错误稍多；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

Everyone in longing for success, whereas, the Fates only appreciate the mayority of the crowd. Why? Opportunities merely belong to those who are well prepared for the challenges ahead, either is success. In our pursuit for success, three elements——target, keen, persistence account. Target, serves as you orientation for endevours. Once settled, you will understand your value for existence as well as the meaning for efforts. Enthuaism, keeps your interest up. It is your obsession on your career that makes all your endevours worthy and makes you better concentrate your restrict powers. Peseverance,the essential one of three factors, is indispensable in our strive ,for without persistence ,what we have done will be in vain, thus we fail.Remember, however ardous the project is, be cofident and stick to trying ,neve give up. Abide by the items above, we can eventually manage it.