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Dear Tom, When I heard you will visit Taiwan,I'm so happy to get some introduce for you. Taiwan Island,the largest island in our country.It lies to southeast of Fujian and its to the north is East Sea and its to the east is the Pacific Ocean and its to the southwest is surrounded by South Ocean.Taiwan Island is about 36000 square kilometer but there are only population about 20000000.When you arrive Taiwan,you can see the more different kinds of biological and a lot of bananas,rices,teas and so on.The scenery in Taiwan is so beautiful and the climate also is good that the more the traveler come here every yeas. At last,I wish you have nice time.