采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多。
Dear Tom, When I heard you will visit Taiwan,I'm so happy to get some introduce for you. Taiwan Island,the largest island in our country.Located in the southeast of fujian province, east China sea in the north, faces the Pacific on the east, south-west was surrounded by the south China sea.Taiwan Island is about 36000 square kilometer but there are only population about 20000000.When you arrive Taiwan,you can see the more different kinds of biological and a lot of bananas,rices,teas and so on.Such the scenery in Taiwan is so beautiful and the climate is good that more and more travelers come here all over the world. At last,I wish you have nice time.