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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；文中词汇表达多样性要加强，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段。
Some scholars are talking about where to go this afternoon in the classroom.In the end,they decided to amusemengt park in order to admiering beutiful views,of course they for cleaning dity glass and river then put them away bin It is in the way that they can prevent enviroment by themselves,hopelly moer and moer can pay attention to love the only home-earth
