小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my good friend is Lili, she have a long hair ,a bright eyes and a nice face , she is good at singing and danceing , she love dogs and always walk the dogs ,we usually go to school together . on the weekend ,we often study in my home , when have difficult ,she is willing to help me,she is my best friend