Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
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Dear Peter, Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think you can communicate with your mother ,after all,your mather worried for you 。you should understand it。 when your mather stop you from palying games ,you shouldn't angry with your mom.you can calmly say:”mom I just have a relax after finishing my homework。 you shuold believe me,I won't indulge in them。“ The most important thing is you must control yourself。 Good luck for you!