2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；文中有几处句子错误；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Now many kids have some problem in daily lifes.For example, less effectively communicate with others,they don't know how to do housework.What's cause that happens? Because of many families just have one child,so they put all their love to their babies, they want the kids have a happy childhood,fear the child suffer a hard time,so the parents provide a convient way that the child no need to worry about it to their child.But when the child growth up,they don't know how to live without the help by their parents,they rather bear the situation they are suffering than to solve it,all those issue it's thier parents made. In that case,we need to help them to change their mind, let them live an independent life, learn to do all thing by themselves,and we also let the other parents know the disadvantage that don't let the child indepent.