2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My view on Online Shopping Now many people on online shopping and it is become fashion.more and more people is support online shopping . Firstly, it is save so many time and to do anotherthings.Finally,it is very comfort that people to choose in my a view ,every coin has two side,we must Rational shopping