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My School Rules In our school, we have many rules. We shouldn’t be late for school. We have to wear school uniforms to school every day. We can’t run or shout in the hallways. We can’t eat in class. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class. We aren’t allowed to smoke in school. I think our school rules are too strict. We should be allowed to choose our own clothes. That will make us more comfortable. We shouldn’t have too much homework to do every day.
