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My School Rules In our school, we have many rules.firstly,we must not be late for class.secondly,we shoud finish homework in time.thirdly,we should respect our teacher.I hold the opinion that these rules are good for us and our school should add some rules.For example,do not wasting food,must not smoking,keep our school clean and tidy.I believe that if every student make a difference to school,our school will be more beautiful.