2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Computer and Man With the development of our society ,more and more people depend on computer .computer become a important part in our life,it take our many convenience and help us solve many difficulty problems.however ,it also take us some bad influence .so we must balance how to use it. Computer make our life more and more fast ,it let the globle distance very short ,we use it chatting on internet ,make friend.we also use it serch information and learn somewhere we want to travel .what is more ,we can shopping ,we can listening music ,we can watch TV or movie ,we can study new knowledge . On the one hand ,Computer also make some troubles.some younger are absorb in playing games that interrupt their study.some people use computer cheat people in order to gain money or important information .as far as i think alwaly use computer is bad for our eyes and body. All in all,we must learn use computer advantages and disanvantages,only this we can better use it .