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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12936
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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全文结构较为严谨;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;作者词汇量较小,单词拼写也要注意;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

For this day , the develop of society become more and more fast and advance. Especially for the electronic communication, it make people closer and share the information easily.Many peole use the web comunication tool such as webchat, facebook ,skype do some activity .It indeed good for comunication.At the same time, it also have some problem can not replace for the face to face problem.Like the picture tell us, the mother and son live together, only use the computer to transmit the information, it lack of humanity and the relationship between the family. Family need face to face comunication, it can make the family closely together.The electronic communication never do this .

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