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题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
In recent years, people are living an increasingly high pace life. It is not strange to read some news in which white-collar people die suddenly because of constantly working day and night. So there's a question in our way of live: Whether should we live in hurry or at a slower pace? In my opinion, I believe that it is better to live slowly, which is beneficial to our work and entertainment and body health as well. Firstly, a slow pace lifestyle can make us work outstanding. There's no doubt that details determine whether to succeed or fail. When we are allowed more time to think about the topics,to find out the keys to the questions or the points which shouldn't be neglected, we can make decisions reasonably and thus making a good progress. So it enables us to do better and can help our career. Secondly, living slowly is an undeniable factor to affect our life's quality. For example , people in my hometown Chengdu,which is located in the southwestern of China, are famous for their carefree lifestyle. Here we would like to drink a tea under the warm sunshine after work.Sometimes we also watch movies or play sports with friends. We appreciate this kind of life and firm a positive attitude towards difficulties in life. Thirdly, it also offers benefits to our health. By living more slowly, we can spare more time to concern our health.Besides, we are far away from illness for having a rest during the work. Therefore, I prefer to live slowly, not only to work better, but also to feel happy and energetic.
