Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中用词稍显贫乏,请多使用学术词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Nowaday , many students use the Internet for learning .It is good for learning out of school . Afer you learn something in the school ,you can search the information about what you learn from the school on the google .The internet was assisted for the school education. I think School education is more important than the internet education.First,it let students learn how to cooperate with people when they face the problem.Second ,it is a pratical activity, you can ask help for the teacher.Third, it is a happy thing when you meet with many student.education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. So education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information.