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My favourite subject My favourite subject is math.Math is difficult.But I think Difficult challenge. If title is more and more difficult.The title is more and more interesting.I love math because it is can give me confidence.And it can with me Until forever.I can't give it up.It likes my good friend.Play with me until forever. I love my friend.But I like math better.