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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6638
要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用学术词汇,文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;熟练使用了一些长难句。

用户练习作文:

the cartoon illustrates that the boat graduately goes forward on the river, where two men are enjoying the beautiful sight and throwing their rubbish at will, as a result the river is chocked with a amount of nasty rubbish. the drawing vividly reveals that all kinds of environmental problems have cropped up accompanying human activities. indeed ,the pollution is growing by leaps and bounds , exceeding our imagination. the shrewd human master the skills of producting a lot of garbage while lack of environmental protecting awareness. if such a circumstance continues, the situation of the movie Walle , in which the earth is little suitable for mankind living, maybe not far away . in addition, the government should also blame for barely diffusing the relevant knowledge and put low value on the pollution task comparing to economic problem. to sump it up, the critical step that should be taken is to raise citizens' awareness and urge to cultivate good manners . simultaneously, the authority should strengthen the rules that impose punishment on those who destroy the environment .

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