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the cartoon illustrates that the boat graduately goes forward on the river, where two men are enjoying the beautiful sight and throwing their rubbish at will, as a result the river is chocked with a amount of nasty rubbish. the drawing vividly reveals that all kinds of environmental problems have cropped up accompanying human activities. indeed ,the pollution is growing by leaps and bounds , exceeding our imagination. the shrewd human master the skills of producting a lot of garbage while lack of environmental protecting awareness. if such a circumstance continues, the situation of the movie Walle , in which the earth is little suitable for mankind living, maybe not far away . in addition, the government should also blame for barely diffusing the relevant knowledge and put low value on the pollution task comparing to economic problem. to sump it up, the critical step that should be taken is to raise citizens' awareness and urge to cultivate good manners . simultaneously, the authority should strengthen the rules that impose punishment on those who destroy the environment .