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2013年5月18日雅思大作文真题:School Curriculum Design

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:00浏览次数:796
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Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

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Some people think that it's totally unnecessary for children to learn subject like history, art, for these subjects have nothing to do with life. While others may argue that history and art is the core essence of one nation's culture and the identity of its citizens, they play an indispensable role in each citizen's development. Nowadays, some parents and youngsters think that it would be more practical to only offer children with some useful subjects, like Language, Math, chemistry, physics, which can be applied in daily life. They'd like to put it in an economical way, with the subjects mentioned above can guarantee an individual's basic needs for reading, calculating, common knowledge. The more one learns about these subjects, the more one gets restricted by them. But another group of people may oppose this arguments. They claim that the view of their opponent are shortsighted. For example, history can teach people how to judge at a critical moment; art develops one's artistic eye and taste for life; Law help one get the basic knowledge of one's rights and obligation. More or less, or sooner or later, these subjects will have some significant influences on one's life. Children usually have a strong curiosity for the world, it's important to teach them different subjects to help them learn about their surroundings. Rather than overly emphasize one than another.

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