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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40893
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章能较灵活使用词汇,学术词汇有些少,还需注意个别拼写错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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slowly make a conclusion In our daily life, most of us always prefer to make a conclusion quickly without finding out the best answer and looking for the objective truth. Based on many life experiences, it is unwise to make a conclusion when you are only seeing something happened and listening to somebody's words. Sometimes, you will be treated by what you have saw and heard. Take myself for example. It's happened not long before, I saw two of my best friends was talking secretly on the baclony. I wanted to turn back and I stopped when I heard that they talk something about me. At that time, you cannot imagine how sad and angry I am because I thought they must talk about my shortcoming and make fun of it. Two days later, it's my birthday. I was suprised when I came in the room, because they held a birthday party for me. And then I knew I was wrong before, I misunderstood my best friends. They just wanted to give me a suprise! After that day, I realized that we cannot be in a hurry when making a conclusion. Maybe we will hurt the people we love. So,no matter what happened, just don't worry to believe , go and find the real truth!

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