2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；句式变化多样；作者词汇基础不错，学术词汇表达比较恰当，避免拼写错误；请注意分段。

the cartoon illustrates that the boat graduately goes forward on the river, where two men are enjoying the beautiful lanscape and throwing their rubbish at will, as a result the river is chocked with a amount of nasty litter and trash . the drawing vividly reveals that all kinds of environmental problems have arised accompanying human activities. indeed ,the pollution is growing by leaps and bounds , exceeding our imagination. the shrewd human master the skills of producting a lot of garbage while lack of environmental consciousness. if such a circumstance continues, the situation of the movie Wall-E , in which the earth is little suitable for mankind living, maybe not far away . in addition, the government should also blame for barely diffusing the relevant knowledge and put low value on the pollution task comparing to economic problem. to sump it up, the critical step that should be taken is to raise citizens' awareness and urge to cultivate good manners . simultaneously, the authority should strengthen the rules that impose punishment on those who destroy the environment