高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport My favorite sport is playing football. I love playing soccer by a casually chance. I picked up a football on my way back home. After that, I played it with my friends. Ever since I love playing football. I always trained and competed with my classmates. My most favorite star is Backhom. My best wish is to become a professional soccer player.