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甘肃武威六中2013届高三第二次模拟试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:24浏览次数:2479
要求:
目前,一些诸如GG, MM, Xia Mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行,并且出现在家庭作业报告,甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以“Should Internet Slang Be Forbidden(禁止)?”为题,根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文,并谈谈你自己的看法。
一些同学认为:网络语言生动、时尚,网络语言充满幽默与智慧,使网上聊天更快捷。
另一些同学认为:网络语言缺乏思想性,没有被大部分人理解、接受,过多使用使人不解,甚至误解。
你的看法:?

注意:

1. 短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数;   2. 词数:100左右

3. 参考词汇:生动的vivid;智慧intelligence
Should Internet Slang Be forbidden?
At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”,has become popular among the teenagers.
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”,has become popular among the teenagers.As we all know,the Internet is very useful to our human.Therefore,there are much unhealthy message leads we misunderstand.So there are some advice I would be happy put forward. Firstly,some student thinks Internet Slang is useful for youngs.The reason is that Internet Slang is vivid and fashion, Internet Slang is very humor and intelligence makes chatting very fast;Ohter students thinks that Internet Slang luck thinking,not understand-ed for most of the people,makes some people misunderstand. As far as I am concerned,I don't like Internet Slang because it makes me very puzzled and bored.And the Internet is also harmful to us at all if we can not control ourself. Finally,I do not think Internet Slang is useful to us,that's all,thank you!

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