注意:
1. 短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数; 2. 词数:100左右
3. 参考词汇:生动的vivid;智慧intelligence文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”,has become popular among the teenagers.As we all know,the Internet is very useful to our human.Therefore,there are much unhealthy message leads we misunderstand.So there are some advice I would be happy put forward. Firstly,some student thinks Internet Slang is useful for youngs.The reason is that Internet Slang is vivid and fashion, Internet Slang is very humor and intelligence makes chatting very fast;Ohter students thinks that Internet Slang luck thinking,not understand-ed for most of the people,makes some people misunderstand. As far as I am concerned,I don't like Internet Slang because it makes me very puzzled and bored.And the Internet is also harmful to us at all if we can not control ourself. Finally,I do not think Internet Slang is useful to us,that's all,thank you!