2006年山东高考写作范文：介绍美丽家乡

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First of all, I would lile to introduce the beautiful scenery to you, so you can do some preparation for your traveling. There are many world famous places in Sichuan province, such as the Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. Jiuzhaigou is a very beautiful place, it's just like the paradise, you can see the lake that is very clear, in another, there are all kinds of colar showed in the lake, you can image the Shanhu in the sea. In autumn, the colar is also very shine, becuase there are all kind of trees in the mountain. you will find that the natural is very magical. Certainly, the Dujiangyan Irrigation project is also a good place that you cannot miss. It has long history with more than 2000 years. by now Dujiangyan Irrigation project still plays an important function. I am sure you will like it. By the way, the weather is fine and the transportion is very convinence, so please don't worry about you will not fit there. If you have any problem i would help you. Hope meet you very soon.